Masterpiece!

Wait, this isn't about Gabe Newell and Activision?

This is an epic combination of tech-based music and orchestral instrumentation.
I'm going to remix this. Do you mind?

It's Good.

You need a better soundfont though, but there IS a really good one that comes with
FL Studio, called STR_Ensemble. If that's what you used, thenb throw in the Mellotron and a Deep Organ with it, And you should get the desired effect.
Hope this helps, Oh, and make sure to tell me when you've done this. :D

Don't leave, please.

The last thing this site needs is artists who give up. This is good work, keep it up and stick with it 'till one of your songs makes it to the top. Again, don't ever give up, you'd regret it.