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This is an epic combination of tech-based music and orchestral instrumentation.
I'm going to remix this. Do you mind?

LazyBucks responds:

Sure but best to wait until the full version is released, more to work with :)

I'll keep you posted

It's Good.

You need a better soundfont though, but there IS a really good one that comes with
FL Studio, called STR_Ensemble. If that's what you used, thenb throw in the Mellotron and a Deep Organ with it, And you should get the desired effect.
Hope this helps, Oh, and make sure to tell me when you've done this. :D

Don't leave, please.

The last thing this site needs is artists who give up. This is good work, keep it up and stick with it 'till one of your songs makes it to the top. Again, don't ever give up, you'd regret it.

Great Work

You should talk with Wolfire and see if you can't get them to put this song in their new game Overgrowth. It fits the series very well, I think they may consider it.

wyldfyre1 responds:

Huh, Well if they want to use it just remember to credit myself and F-777 properly =). In all honosty the song is far from finished but if they like it as is then cool.

Beautiful

Frankly, I feel guilty having my submission above yours. It's a beautiful work.
10/10.

Good Beat

But, the lyrics are pretty much random or taken from poetry.
Did I hear "MotherF##kin Lint" at one point. It's pretty hard to tell what you're singing. Heck, It might have even been better Instrumental. Otherwise, it was awesome.
-JR-Sayer-

Lexivus responds:

Tyvm, yeah the lyrics are extremely random. Its just an example of what I have achieved with my knowledge on creating music. I'm working on an actual song right now. On this one you can actually tell what I'm saying haha :D

Good, but...

I think if it sounded more like the main melody was swooping (going up and down in volume on the beat), and you make the main beats more imposing and/or forceful, you would have something quite outstanding. I'm not saying it's not good, it is - but with some work it came become something truly great.

Jnr1114 responds:

I tried that a little. It really ruined the song. It kind of imploded it.
What I plan do to further is add some notes to the Trumpets and add some cymbals. Also make it longer with some more melodys.

Thanks for reviewing!

Very Nice

I'm not usually into happy music (as you can tell by my submissions), but this song was really great, everything about just felt right, nothing seemed like it needed to be changed.

Jnr1114 responds:

Wow, thanks :D. I am too more into depressing music but I find it hard with Piano and Orchestral. I am working on one now, pretty depressing. Let me know if you'd like to see it.

-JNR

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